Tuesday, August 18, 2009

I Feel Absence Of You Comments

Rating: 5.0

If the time looks like a flower
Swallows beat their wings
Achild cries silently
And a train leaves full of foreign place
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Nilufer Dursun
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Afzal Shauq 13 October 2009

Now I feel absence of you Old songs at my lips Time looks like flowing streams Your memoir from you to me has been a sunflower looking at the sun Because of your longing a good work that you did in professional way... to present to readers..really liked it..well done 10/10

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HM DeGratePoet 03 October 2009

Thanks for translating this nice poem, Nilufer.

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