Monday, October 5, 2009

I Feel Comments

Rating: 5.0

The snow has gotten in the way of everything.
Homes have been turned into
gingerbread houses
topped with sugar.
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maegan trafford
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2009

And a false step sends one plunging up to the waist in snow. And i feel white and cold and confused. I feel like a snowman..lovley and intersting poem and feels the pulse of cruelnature too...10

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Gwenda Madison 09 October 2009

nice poem...good job........

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Jessica Hoffman 09 October 2009

a very interesting poem..keep writing........

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