Monday, December 7, 2009

I Fed The World My Tears Comments

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I fed the world my tears
With sobs of wile and woe.
Sternly, I faced my fears
To hearts of young and old.
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Dennis Go
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Jason Bradley 07 December 2009

Excellent, and powerful. I especially like how you created the stanzas.

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Dennis Go

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