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"Love at first sight"
I can assert
And emphatically say
You were all the way
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HOPE Steven Kayiira19 minutes ago a great love story Comment +1
nice Rangehbok Lyngwa19 minutes ago Good love poem, simple and true
good Matthew Murphy19 minutes ago interesting Comment +1
Romantic and sweet, you fear more when your eager to give your heart away, love at first sight is risky, but fill us with hope and brings us to the moment, like when you say, i feel river flow under feet, i remain eager to greet, i can relate, i enjoyed reading your poem :) 22 minutes ago by Christina Macias | Reply
:) Logan Taylor19 minutes ago I really enjoyed the second half of the poem. I had a difficult time connecting to the first part, but seemed to really engage with the second.
heartfelt R3N016 minutes ago the rhymes may work against the overall emotion. at times it rhymes and others not, and other times they seem forced. love poems are always heart string tuggers as is this one, however im not sure there is anything to set it apart here. perhaps delve more into what makes this feeling personal or unique. all best
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7/23/2025 8:45:58 AM # 1.0.0
Not your voice alone but your sweet tone... lovely expression. Loved this poem.5 stars.