Monday, March 19, 2012

I Fear Comments

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I fear for the innocent
I fear for the law
I fear for the young
I fear for the old
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Dave Alan Walker
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Hazel Connelly 11 September 2012

Well written we all have fearat times.

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Jose Guevara 22 April 2012

I fear for my sanity sometimes too, but I rather enjoy living at the edge of it

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 23 March 2012

try to look this world from a different angle.good effort.jk

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Kevin Patrick 21 March 2012

The closing is the best part, it makes me want to read it over and over again. which I am doing

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 20 March 2012

We live in the crazy world...well written.

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Eric Cockrell 19 March 2012

well written... compassion wields a mighty sword!

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Daniel Warner 19 March 2012

Good mental structure in this poem.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

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