I fall in love like a ship takes to sea
through the storms and the tempests and tranquility
like a bird to the air, like the buzzing of bee
I fall in love so easily
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really an original and creative treatise on the essence of love with natural overtones...and the writer sharing his evocative insight as to the specialness of natural beauty.....really in touch with the senses...flowing and melodic
Our hearts upon on sleeves, romantics through the time. They say it is better to love and lost that never to have loved. But I think that person must have been a full fledged hermit! Great write Patricia
Charlie - Wonderful poem! It's difficult to be the first one to fall, not knowing if the other one is in the same space or not. Love is always a gamble, is it not? Sometimes we win, sometimes we lose, and alot of the time we just get rained out. But it's all worth the effort, I guess. Linda
To fall in love implies courage to face vulnerability. Anyway, this is a very accomplished poem, a rhyme scheme I've never seen before - altogether admirable in message and in form. You seem to be open to new experience, as is a ship that takes to sea. Great read.