Thursday, April 15, 2010

I Failed-The Good Bye Letter Comments

Rating: 4.6

im sorry to you all but i must say good-bye
ive done nothing but failed, now theres no use to try
the only fair option is to die
when your a fallen angel all theirs left to do is die
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Brandon Hoeg
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ellie carpenter 26 April 2010

this poem is really good theres nothing bad to say about the poem. your a good writer keep it up

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Mrs.Joseph =) 26 April 2010

So Sad but a really great poem! +10

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Sarah Reamey 22 April 2010

This is pretty good, Sad but good. I'd watch the rhyming so many words that sounded alike tho. Like make two words and the end of a sentance rhyme then make two more rhyme. But yeah good work!

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Summer H. 16 April 2010

very sad but your point in this poem did get across.

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Josh Schultz 15 April 2010

SAD i understand tho.

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Brandon Hoeg

Brandon Hoeg

North Minneapolis
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