im sorry to you all but i must say good-bye
ive done nothing but failed, now theres no use to try
the only fair option is to die
when your a fallen angel all theirs left to do is die
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This is pretty good, Sad but good. I'd watch the rhyming so many words that sounded alike tho. Like make two words and the end of a sentance rhyme then make two more rhyme. But yeah good work!
this poem is really good theres nothing bad to say about the poem. your a good writer keep it up