Wednesday, March 14, 2012

I Fail To Understand What God Was Thinking Comments

Rating: 3.0

I am trying hard to understand
Why God placed us here in such a state
Still I am afraid to reprimand
Him who put me here and tempt my fate
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Richard Lackman
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Joseph Anderson 12 June 2012

When you figure it out, get back with me. Deep probing intropection in a well packaged, flowing style. In my opinion worth a 10

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Latisha Barker 06 May 2012

I truly understand these words and often think similar thoughts. Beautiful poem!

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Melissa Carey 10 April 2012

So well written, just stunning. God has most certainly blessed you with many, many talents! You need to publish a book of poetry.

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Valerie Dohren 14 March 2012

An excellent write again Dick. Your poems always flow and rhyme so well. Good work. (I don't know what God was thinking either, but then I am not a believer anyway) .

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