((((((I....Exhale......Youuuuuu))))) Comments

Sorry, i must just be in awe? ? Either that or i have no sense as a poet... 'Before I inhale you I exhale you' I like alot, a great choice of words, Enjoy....

Is it a purging out lust…symbolically but what about innate sensuousness? An enigma poet gave readers to workout. Ten.[goofed - vote box] dr. sakti Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and….

You leave the reader in a quandary in the dust of lust wanting more but blown away mmmm++++10 regards

'Before I inhale you I exhale you' Rachel Ann Butler

Short but strong poem......wonderful one

Few words but a powerful meaning! You have got your point across!

Petty pretty poem of Pleasure!

few words huge meaning good one

so few words but filled with hundred meanings., great poem..

simple short poem hides behind and between its lines alot of feelings.. nice dear tamara.. hazem al..

beautiful write..........short

Thats not fair, Tamarra.

Okay I've never really liked short poems, havn't seen any point to them, but that was realy good, straight to the point and I could feel the emotion of it just from those four lines...Good work =)

Neat! Love it :)

simple true and to the point. I love short poems!

thats a amazing and very well put well well done

i inhale the fragrance of this piece..naizz

You have captured a river in a drop, beautiful! 10++++

Excellent. With few lines. Told a lot.10+++

so sweet... a rich idea in few lines.. well done liked it very much..wonderful 10+++++++