((((((I....Exhale......Youuuuuu))))) Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Okay I've never really liked short poems, havn't seen any point to them, but that was realy good, straight to the point and I could feel the emotion of it just from those four lines...Good work =)

Neat! Love it :)

simple true and to the point. I love short poems!

thats a amazing and very well put well well done

i inhale the fragrance of this piece..naizz

Sorry, i must just be in awe? ? Either that or i have no sense as a poet... 'Before I inhale you I exhale you' I like alot, a great choice of words, Enjoy....

Is it a purging out lust…symbolically but what about innate sensuousness? An enigma poet gave readers to workout. Ten.[goofed - vote box] dr. sakti Cordially invite to my page [poem] read / comment and….

You leave the reader in a quandary in the dust of lust wanting more but blown away mmmm++++10 regards

'Before I inhale you I exhale you' Rachel Ann Butler

Short but strong poem......wonderful one