Wednesday, August 24, 2016

I Envy This Pen Comments

Rating: 4.6

I envy this pen,
It writes and then hangs
Between the soft lips
Takes a bite of the teeth
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 26 July 2020

You have all reasons to envy that pen. But your writing is far superior to it so keep writing instead who knows what you will own someday (better than that pen) . Ten Thumbs up.

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Valsa George 30 August 2016

What privilege the pen is enjoying.....! ! But don't wish to be a pen in your next birth....... Continue to be the gifted poet.....! Interesting write!

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 26 August 2016

Picture perfect, so the envy, delightful, thanks

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Abduhoo Salamath 24 August 2016

excellent... very nice written..

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

Between the soft lips! Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 24 August 2016

Wowww. just amazing. A very creative piece of writing.10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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