I Envy The Woman Whose Lips Comments

aaah i love it.........honest and gut wrenching felt it feel it. great terrific poem

Yes! This is very good stuff! Amicalement votre, Ronberge

Excellent! Let's hope there's a sequel where you're no longer envying, you're experiencing the kiss, and more...

Methinks that, judging from the way you write, you have little to envy others over. This is very good, and calm, and sad but it speaks. H