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you need a true people beside you sweetheart to help you to get away from vices.. don't make yourself bz with nonsense works dear...always keep in mind, ourselves are the only doctors of our sickness...i love this piece of yours...make good things daily, pray always... always keep on writing...this piece is a very beautiful one.. naizz

Not bad at all. Helplessness is a very depressing sympton to say the least and I can sympatise with the situation illustrated here. I think maybe for improvement you should try adjusting some of the wordings so that it can flow a little easier with the reader-which shouldn't be hard becuase the idea is all there. I look forward to reading more and thank you for sharing.