Thursday, November 15, 2007

(i.E. A Sudden, Stark Outburst) Comments

Rating: 2.1

(composed while flying out of Berlin)

dim street colors
like brown barley rooftops
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Jonzo Bandwagoner
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Landrey 04 December 2007

definately a new and favorite favorite of mine. it's perfectly refined, perfectly moving and perfectly perfect. The only thing that takes away from the nostalgic mood of this poem is your pen name. I needs to be more respectable. I mean you use the word 'denouement' in you poem...get something more french sounding please! ! keep it up! ! -landrey

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Jonzo Bandwagoner

Jonzo Bandwagoner

Huntington, NY
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