I Dreamt Of Sunshine Comments
I dreamt of sunshine in water pools
Of drops and ripples smiling though undone
Of a moonlit Luna and her ancient fools
Barking at the newly born sun
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Nicely done sonnet. Rhyme pattern typical Elizabethan Sonnet. Hard to do but you did it well. Some lines do not have a true rhyme but it is very pleasing nevertheless. Congrats on having it chosen as member poem of the day!
Wonderful poetry. Liked every line of it. Thanks for sharing.
To live here again knowing there is no love. Touching expression.
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7/28/2025 1:01:23 AM # 1.0.0
Transmutation? To live vicariously thru others? A sad and incomplete life is, But if it gives poems like this Well rewarded, the reader be.