Saturday, December 12, 2020

I Dreamt Of Angelhood Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dreamt of angelhood as the blood of
Sacred vision stirred in the bone machine.
I dreamt of rebirth deep in the heart of
The ripened sun that purifies plagued streets.
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Shaun Cronick 13 December 2020

A poem that reads like a state of Grace as we Catholic's say, one devoid of sin. Dreams or angelic visions, a fine and poetic line to balance on, let alone decide on. Your wondrous and ethereal poem flows magnificently. A poem that lifts the spirit. Full marks Dominic. For writing a poem that delivers and delivers more than well. Many thanks and enjoy life.

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Varsha M 12 December 2020

And angelhood in dark hours Build my hope that's crushed Carring me to horizon that's clear Strengthening me to make my best All because I wished it happen first. Beautiful and nicely free flowing poetic expression of dream that ultimately leads to destination destined. Beautiful creativity.

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