Sunday, December 20, 2015

I Dreamt Of A Yellow Christmas Comments

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I dreamt of a yellow Christmas
the night before
and a little girl with yellow hair
yawning on a mat made of straw
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka
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Marianne Reninger 20 December 2015

You really created a visual picture. I am an artist and poet and your color yellow really symbolized the tropical aspects of your poem. I often have a dream of surgery as a child, with yellow swirls of anesthesia created by ether. Your poem felt like a dream to me. Marianne Reninger

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Thank you Marianne for your nice comment. I think when you get to a certain age, then childhood becomes like a dream.

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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka

Birgitta Abimbola Heikka

Lagos, Nigeria
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