Monday, May 5, 2014

I Dreamt I Danced With You Comments

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Last night I dreamt I danced with you -
We Waltzed between the stars
Then Quickstepped through the asteroids
Passed Jupiter and Mars.
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Valerie Dohren
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Amitava Sur 20 June 2014

Such a beautiful imagery Valerie remembering dancing with beloved took me or dragged me in a diff. world.A lovely poem in deed. Thank you.

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Elena Sandu 18 June 2014

Valerie this poem made me feel the joy of waltzing with the sunrise and tango with the sunset. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem!

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Meena Mustafa 26 May 2014

A lovely flight of fancy... beautifully written.

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Lucifera Santez 25 May 2014

Last night I dreamt I danced with you But now the dream has gone Yet in my heart the memory Shall linger on and on. this is amazing. you are a gem Val, the way you write, everybody cant do that. :)

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Bursting with a beauty that can awaken dreams into reality of poetic perfection! Excellently expressed my friend!

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Hans Vr 15 May 2014

The most wonderful dances we dance in our imagination. If we manage to stick a bit of it in our memory and pluck and here and there a flake of it it will brighten our life and that of others Fantastic poem, Val.

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Susy Evelyne 12 May 2014

What a gorgeous dream you had! The way you narrate your poem, it feels like we've been dancing with you. A lovely flight of fancy; esp like the crimson silk gown and quickstepping through asteroids!

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Susy Evelyne 12 May 2014

What a gorgeous dream you had! The way you narrate your poem, it feels we've been dancing with you. A lovely flight of fancy. Love the crimson silk gown and quickstepping through asteroids!

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Mary Forrester 12 May 2014

How lovely a dream was that Valerie.

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Hazel Durham 09 May 2014

Stunning dance of words capturing a vivid and serene dream that entrances! !

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Celestial dance indeed. Magnificently performed.

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Dave Walker 06 May 2014

A beautiful poem, memories last forever.

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Dinesan Madathil 06 May 2014

Dancing for a while is very kind of you Val. The duo dancing all across the space is a pleasant thing and I would like to see you both performing from a distance.... At the end of this dream let your mind begin to dance Val..

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Valsa George 06 May 2014

Escorted to a magic land where two souls reel round holding hands in tune to the celestial symphony and made one in spirit.... Though the dream is evanescent, it can still give you a hang over for days... I am sure!

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Juan Olivarez 05 May 2014

Val I have said it so many times, you are the greatest. No one can write verse like you can. Beautiful poem God bless.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 05 May 2014

wonderfully written...a fine poem!

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Susan Lacovara 05 May 2014

Though this dance may have ended...the band plays on. Beautiful, sensual write, two lovers swaying in the night. Can I just have one more moondance, with you, my friend...as Van Morrison alludes to. Lovely, two steppin' along with your words. PEACE and a wonderful partner, my wish for you on this day....continue to dance

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