Last night I dreamt I danced with you -
We Waltzed between the stars
Then Quickstepped through the asteroids
Passed Jupiter and Mars.
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Valerie this poem made me feel the joy of waltzing with the sunrise and tango with the sunset. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem!
Last night I dreamt I danced with you But now the dream has gone Yet in my heart the memory Shall linger on and on. this is amazing. you are a gem Val, the way you write, everybody cant do that. :)
Bursting with a beauty that can awaken dreams into reality of poetic perfection! Excellently expressed my friend!
The most wonderful dances we dance in our imagination. If we manage to stick a bit of it in our memory and pluck and here and there a flake of it it will brighten our life and that of others Fantastic poem, Val.
What a gorgeous dream you had! The way you narrate your poem, it feels like we've been dancing with you. A lovely flight of fancy; esp like the crimson silk gown and quickstepping through asteroids!
What a gorgeous dream you had! The way you narrate your poem, it feels we've been dancing with you. A lovely flight of fancy. Love the crimson silk gown and quickstepping through asteroids!
Stunning dance of words capturing a vivid and serene dream that entrances! !
Dancing for a while is very kind of you Val. The duo dancing all across the space is a pleasant thing and I would like to see you both performing from a distance.... At the end of this dream let your mind begin to dance Val..
Escorted to a magic land where two souls reel round holding hands in tune to the celestial symphony and made one in spirit.... Though the dream is evanescent, it can still give you a hang over for days... I am sure!
Val I have said it so many times, you are the greatest. No one can write verse like you can. Beautiful poem God bless.
Though this dance may have ended...the band plays on. Beautiful, sensual write, two lovers swaying in the night. Can I just have one more moondance, with you, my friend...as Van Morrison alludes to. Lovely, two steppin' along with your words. PEACE and a wonderful partner, my wish for you on this day....continue to dance
Such a beautiful imagery Valerie remembering dancing with beloved took me or dragged me in a diff. world.A lovely poem in deed. Thank you.