Thursday, December 22, 2016

I Dreamt A Dream Comments

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I dreamt a dream
When there were no fear nor hate
I saw smile of ants
I heard song of owls
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Baharak Barzin
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Clarence Prince 13 January 2017

This is really a nice piece of work about your dream, especially verse three which I like best!

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Daniel Brick 06 January 2017

Your dream is packed with possible dreams and impossible dreams: overall the mix of both types made me a believer in even the most outlandish ones, like smile of ants, roses on glaciers and a symphony of lovers (who composed that special music? !) But myfavorite impossible dream from yourmpoem is THE FORGIVENESS OF TIME. How necessary is that dream! It will be my mission to contribute to its realization.

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Baharak Barzin 06 January 2017

Daniel thank you so much for contemplating about my words. Your deep understanding of my poems always excites me. I think time is so generous at least it lets us dream when we are young and old, asleep or awake. Sober or drunk

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