I Dreamed. Comments

Well done, but may I point out that commas do not come after if. Read mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline

I loved this poem! ! My name is Emma Wright too! Im not usually that into poetry but I very much enjoyed this! Thank you and keep writing!

Hey guys, just a message to all to ask you guys to ask please to vote for my poem if you liked it. Cheers, Emma.

I love this poem its one of my favorites

Emma, I enjoyed this! Great theme and very lyrical, the first two lines are excellent. Just a suggestion but the last two lines might read better if you had said: And if so I wondered which was truth, And which was BUT a dream. Keep posting, Richard