Sunday, August 18, 2013

I Dreamed Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

I dreamed of love
but not like this –

a silent heart
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Valerie Dohren
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Amitava Sur 16 October 2013

A lovely poem with less words but saying a lot..... very nice

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Rigzin Namgyal 08 October 2013

..a beautiful and sweet dream..wonderful write..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 September 2013

A beautiful piece. You have my best regards, Val x

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Kelvin Owusu 18 September 2013

a wonderful dream that is. I dream that one day if I'm lucky I'll meet the other half of me

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Rekha Mandagere 16 September 2013

So sweetly expressed. Beautiful: -)

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Danny Draper 16 September 2013

In this fine piece are conflicted emotions but guided by love our enduring notion.

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Yasmin Khan 15 September 2013

A beautiful write in compressed meter

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Jonathan H. Scott 13 September 2013

Very nice and easy. Nice.

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Payal Parande 13 September 2013

oh how amazing, wonderful, fascinating and so more just like you........bravo ma'am

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Heather Wilkins 06 September 2013

a beautiful write on love. a great kind of love

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Hans Vr 01 September 2013

I love this poem. We all dream of love in its upmost form. We do find so many mean forms of 'love' that the love our dreams sometimes seems unreal. But we cannot give up. Love is real, love is wonderful. Keep believing, Val, keep dreaming. I keep trying unconcitional love myself. I only succeed in brief moments and it seems more of coincidences than something I really did. But we have to keep beleiving, Val, keep dreaming. Excellent poem

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Dinesan Madathil 31 August 2013

What is love then Valerie? Did you dream of it quite differently than every one one us would? What is perfection is illogical as well.

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Joseph Anderson 31 August 2013

Just like love on a hot afternoon, not what one would wish for. A startling revelation-bittersweet

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R.benjamin Abate 29 August 2013

Pure and sincere. Very nice poem. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 29 August 2013

heart breaking- dream-love-loving-to be loved-dream-love soft and pure- unmeasured beautiful

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Om Chawla 29 August 2013

Reminiscent of your earlier sonnet Speak Truly If You Deem To Speak Of Love wherein you wrote 'For truth should always be lovers tool' Another excellent poem

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Poetheart Morgan 28 August 2013

sweet is your words smooth are your tears needing a slight rest a meeting between love and dream

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Neela Nath Das 28 August 2013

So sweet Val.You are great always!

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Patricia Grantham 27 August 2013

So very sweet a poem and tenderly touching. Dreams do come true if you wish it to be so. When it come only you will know. I really loved this one Val. Regards.

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Kevin Halls 25 August 2013

What did the Beatles sing in that song: All You Need is Love. Sadly the world needs more of it! Nice poem Val.

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