Wednesday, March 14, 2012

I Dreamed A Dream Comments

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I dreamed a dream last, and wow was I charmed
Every crook on this ol`planet had been disarmed

Each and everyone of the bad guys..pointet their guns at me
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Arild Ertsland
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Louis Cecile 17 March 2012

This is a uniquely written style that I have not seen often. The pausing in each line has an effect to induce thought. I like the play of words with the common use of sands of time.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 16 March 2012

good message.... great one... your poem has a wisdom and is useful for us

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