I dreamed a dream last, and wow was I charmed
Every crook on this ol`planet had been disarmed
Each and everyone of the bad guys..pointet their guns at me
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good message.... great one... your poem has a wisdom and is useful for us
This is a uniquely written style that I have not seen often. The pausing in each line has an effect to induce thought. I like the play of words with the common use of sands of time.