Saturday, December 12, 2020

I Dream Of... Comments

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I dream of electric nights filled with dazzling snowflakes of
delicate beauty.
I dream of verdant gardens that are as green as the sweet flowing
genesis of Eden.
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Shaun Cronick 14 December 2020

A more than well written poem that is a pure a joy to read with a conclusion to most admire. Dreams are so tricky to write about for how far can one go without losing perspective. Maybe losing one's writing perspective is the answer. You achieve and deliver so much in your dreaming poem. Full marks and happily bestowed. Thanks for sharing your most poetic imagination Dominic. I wish you well.

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Sandra Feldman 12 December 2020

I love this poem. Every line so meaningfully rich and poetically sublime. I dream of poetry such as yours, crossing the bridges of time being appreciated by a world so lost in their slime. Its become dangerously ignorant, deaf and blind.

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