Sunday, January 4, 2015

I Dream A World Comments

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I dream a world where with every sunrise a new ray of reunion unites the souls
I dream a world where every morrow the dew drops write another wonderful story on the wet leaves
I dream a world where the warriors put their weapons down and wish to end the war in tranquility
I dream a world where the firmament showers love and blessings ending fury on earth
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 June 2016

dream a world where the birds adorn the blissful breathes with their beautiful wings I dream a world where the hundred hues of rainbow radiates in the ripples of every eye I dream a world where the rain relieves all the anguishes and agonies of the ages so far Ah..it really became a poem of the sky, although filled with rich hopeful dreams in stead of sadness. You have beautiful sense of poetry and a great poetic skill. May you sit in each readers heart one day. I wish more of this kind to stream down your pen. Let God put more evening walks. 10 Marks for it. Thanks for sharing the poem. Subhas

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Nishi Kumari 12 June 2016

Thank you so much for your appreciation and comments....it's overwhelming

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Chinedu Dike 08 January 2015

Beautiful! Lovely! A nice dream and a call for Universal Brotherhood Of Man at the moment when man inhumanity to man is prevalent. Kudos Nishi! Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

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Clarence Prince 04 January 2015

Great dream of a wonderful world! Thanks for sharing, Nishi!

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