I Dream
Dream of a better world where people would see each other as nothing more than people of a different shade of gray.
I dream of all my problems crumbling in my hands and never uttering another sound. I dream of love renewed, no more forsaken the day of my fulfillment. I dream of blue skies and flowers in a field of hope and no more despair. I dream of moonlit nights where the smell of jasmine permeates the air with its sweet aroma. I dream of being in love with that one person who takes my breath away. I dream of angels dancing in candlelight.
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You have some great ideas but for me I was finding myself a little bored. I will give you a 6 because it needs improvement on drawing me into the poem, but I did like it. ~Marshall Peter Cline II
I dream because I am alive, and do foster dreams in order that others might live. Maybe I am dreaming of lending support to your dreams...