Monday, February 11, 2008

'I Dream' Comments

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Sometimes i dream that i can fly
and high like a sky
Sometimes i dream that i can drive a car
and ride until i tired
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gerald pilapil
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Gerald Pilapil 13 February 2008

thanks! for your comments...and happy valentine's to all poem writer!

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Howard Johnson 11 February 2008

Excellent write, though short, imo, I think there is room for a few more stanzas..It is a great concept..All the best to you, Gerald

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Gerald Pilapil 11 February 2008

please comments.....

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