Tuesday, September 29, 2009

I Dont Love You Comments

Rating: 1.3

i know our bond is fadding
im sick and tired of all the needless beatings
you say when i get knocked down and out
thats where i oughta stay
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rayne kitten
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iam anass 09 October 2009

thats so sad i love it

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Sans Serif 05 October 2009

I am full and ready to back you up on that one. You shouldn't have to put up with that from anyone. Great write. Great use of emotions for this poem. Keep writing.

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Marieta Maglas 29 September 2009

nice sad lyric poem, very well written........10

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get up and leave! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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