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a lovely short piece bringing to mind a relationship...trust...boxes....attic...i loved its simplicity ans expression...i take it into my favs

Poetic loveliness..... Great write...thank you for sharing all the very best Jon

Boxes in the attic. A magnificient portrait! Thank you.

Now I'm getting a chance to read the rest of your fine poetry- for some odd reason the 101 dalmations stuck in my head all morning. This one is very nice too- your unexpected way with words! By the way, I'm dying to find out if you've ever read Richard Brautigan's 'Spring Hill Mine Disaster, ' his book of surreal poetry......... yes? Craig

This is just too good, stored boxes of trust....not much trust around now days and that's not a comforting feeling at all...I really like this, it is over the moon and stars better than my little Trust poem......Keep writing, forget the bike ride...you've got something good going on here.............marci. :)

This is beautiful! Wonderful writing and thoughts.