Great poem. Well crafted and heart felt. However, kill the 'wanna' and write 'want to' instead. 'Wanna' does not fit with the formality of the rest of your poem.
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Great poem. Well crafted and heart felt. However, kill the 'wanna' and write 'want to' instead. 'Wanna' does not fit with the formality of the rest of your poem.