Monday, July 21, 2008

I Don'T Wanna Be A Lost Cause Comments

Rating: 4.5

I don’t wanna be a lost cause
People ask me something and there’s always a slight pause
I wanna be some one in my life, not because of my charm
I been feeling a harm
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Greenwolfe 1962 02 August 2008

I gave this piece extra credit for it is addressing a large audience with good advice. I wish poetry's audience was larger but a lot of damage has been done and it will take time. GW62

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