I Don'T Quite Get It Comments

True v deep emotion that touches the hearts

A very vivid depiction of deep emotions...well done Rudy.

very beautiful words i like it...... thanks

never ever lose your will to get someone you love, friend.. well penned poem..

Good! And clear concepts.... But dn't lose hope in love dear!

very good writing i could see and feel the frustion in this poem.

It is ok to have 'a feeling of frustation throughout the poem at times. This is a great write.10. keep writing.

A feeling of frustration is seen in the poem through out.

crying is good sometimes. deep stuff. i like

Let tears dropp down then your soul would be quiet and you'll meet someone and forget. Very good and touching writing.

it's really good- deep too! Brilliant ;) x

I know its hard but when someone is not ready, why feel sad for him. This is a poem of teen age feelings. You will get it Rudy as you grow up. Keep on writing!

when a person is not ready and they don't feel it in their heart then it is time to part this is what i see when i read this poem IT IS GOOD, SO CONTINUE TO WRITE.

Lovely poem. Keep writing!