Thursday, October 13, 2011

I Don'T Need Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is shattering,
I feel the shards, puncturing my lungs,
Its hard to breath, my lungs fill with blood
Suffocating...I feel the wounds bursting,
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Stefanie Fontker 13 October 2011

A love never truly had, you write. All love is had, once, twice, a million times, but the loss is just as quick as the gain. Interesting.

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Anhelica Velasquez 13 October 2011

trully amazing, it flashed me back to how i felt, and still kinda do, just a few months ago, 'i dont need love and it dosnt need me' only I myself do need love, and sadly i must admit it. anyway trully amazing poem really it is, i loved it, it was a true poem, came from a soul full of pain, and that is the only way a poem such as this could of been written, shame though, that a poet is at our best when we are at our worst...

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