When you get an attitude and you don't wanna talk.
When you get tempermental wit me I just go for a walk.
When life and your job has got you down.
If you need somebody to take it out on.
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Awe I luv it! If we all had this kind of attitude we would all be alot happier. Putting your mates needs above your own. That is what true commitment is about.
NIce! ! tuesday verses is calling your name..you shouldnt mind :)
Love this! I am a fan of a repetitve line only when used correctly. I have seen it destroy a piece. You again did it perfectly. You placed it in all the right places, it wasn't overbearing and only added to the write instead of distracting from it. Great job. -Robin xoxo
Bravo! I take my hat off for you and your very creative, heart touching and well penned poem that I am very sure will impress many readers like me! Your passionate and poetic talent will take you far! 10+++Keep inspiring the World with your thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
This is beautiful poem, when you love someone you just love them. Love your work, great art.
i had really enjoyed this poem and thought it was very good and sweet. you have a great talent in writing and words. keep up the good work
I love this poem i really felt it and connected to it great job