Thursday, February 14, 2013

I Don'T Look Westward Now... Comments

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Idon't look westward now...
their garden dews reflect the pain of her absence
she left, Abiya my neighbour
leaving her babbling and lisping in my ears
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Gajanan Mishra 23 January 2014

good one, inviting smile, I like it.

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Raghavan Warrier 09 July 2013

leaving her babbling and lisping in my ears she left in the flowers her inviting smile and the butterflies resound her anklets but I am not empty- she hugged her laughter on my shoulder These four lines are too good. It touches the common cord with everybody.

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Kee Thampi 14 April 2013

a poem with a message she left in the flowers her inviting smile and the butterflies resound her anklets

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