Tuesday, May 7, 2013

I Don'T Know Jack Comments

Rating: 5.0

You think I'm a waist of space; attention seeker & disgusting,
However did you think I just couldn't afford my place?
I didn't choose this life.
I would prefer a bed other than the streets,
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Corrine Shoemaker
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Adeline Foster 14 May 2013

Interesting. I too have written one on this subject. Try mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline

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Christy Shoemaker 09 May 2013

Your writing makes me see things in a different light! ! ! ! Your words touch my heart n reaches for my soul! ! ! You r an amazing writer! ! ! Keep them coming! ! ! ! !

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David Wood 08 May 2013

I helped run a night shelter for the homeless last winter where I live. Have a read of my Alone on the Streets, its similar. You have written a brilliant poem. Keep it up 10/10

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