Wednesday, October 16, 2019

I Don't Know About My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know if the sun will rise
For me tomorrow or not
Don't know if the soft wind
Will lift tufts of my grey hair
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Carl Roussell 16 October 2019

I really like the last stanza - gives the whole poem a sense of inner peace - A 10!

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2019

Thanks very much for taking interest in my poetry Sir. Regards.

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Kingsley Egbukole 16 October 2019

The uncertainties of tomorrow, but we must keep on hoping and living. Beautiful. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH. Kingsley Egbukole

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2019

Life has to go on despite ups and down. Thanks very much sir. Regards.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 October 2019

Ignorance is bliss and enjoying that blissful life is in itself wonderful. The life song on this theme is inspirational as well as motivational. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2019

Thanks for wonderful comment and rating Sir. Very kind of you. My heartfelt gratitude.

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