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Really good! ! We all disappear one day.. But its worst wen we know that we miss someone n wen he knows it..

This is beyond nice! Awesome! !

Can I not tempt you to write more poems, you write so naturally, yet you say your not poet, I beg to differ on that statment alone.

Nice poem, enjoyed reading it.

Nice poem, enjoyed reading it.

Really, it seems that a child is telling a tale as he/she heard it.So, simple but nice.

so beautifully said as if the child in u wanted to scream out................life is so simple yet we make it so complicated..........simple words simple life.......great write.

I love this....so much emotion and meaning in a nice compact rounded poem....great read....great thought provoking piece. -SG

I know...smiles....it is written in your soul before you are born, you simply must search your soul and truth will arise...blessings

like the saying goes the more you learn the more you realize you really don't know anything. that is the mystery of life. life would be boring if we knew all the answers anyway.

nice, couldn't help adding a few lines..hope you do not mind I will be here as long as I am here leaving behind my body I will disappear to the stars that shine above there my grandparents told me where

I can say this is somewhat most of people ask to themself at least once in their lifetime, But you craft it well in the region of discovering our life.. You ask where you come where u will go? For me, we will back to where we from.. In perfect answer we will find if we search..It's like the answer is around the corner just us cant find it...But i like the good moving think you end the poem...you never surrender as long as you live..For me this is good short poem to let everyone think the reason we here...the system is complex and to have all scientific explanation it's not coincident just like that...Maybe the eye we used to see need to change with different types of lens _Unwritten Soul

ahh it will be like this if you do not know where to go just live your life and then let life lead you where to go let it lead you and in no time you will realize what you really want (i am not an expert, i am sorry) also i like this poem because almost all of us experience this we do not know anything at some point in our life

Good theme.wonderfully written.

its quiet true we all get lost at some point of time. but we have to find it in our hearts to find out way back... very well written.. keep writing..

Like they say: There are three kind of people in this World: 1) Those who make thins happen 2) Those who watch things happening and 3) Those who wonder what happened! Every mile starts with one first step and I think you made it! Now, the question remains: Would you continue at your own pace? You got the answer! Where you are right now I was and moved on and check where I am right now! In the World of possibilities, anything is possible! Read, read and read! and then, write, write and write so you can enrich your knowledge and give something to the World that is patiently waiting! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....

Nice write..Coz it's true....I can relate to this confusion...