Thursday, January 29, 2009

I Don'T Know Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t understand how the Earth got here
Or how all forms of life came to be
I don’t understand why one is black the other white
Or how with His hands a blind man could see
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Brianna Trombley
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Faith and love are so important in this life. I have often wondered why too! I really liked the way you ended with the rhyme at the end as it locked all into a great piece of work. Well done....Karin Anderson

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Kimber Harrison 03 February 2009

:) Another Really really really good poem. This one and the other one I read just now are my favorites out of all of them. They are absolutely delicious! :)

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Little Morning Star 29 January 2009

Our Almighty will always help us whenever and wherever we be.. well-penned work..

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

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