Friday, December 1, 2006

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The sky is low and thick with clouds of despair
And I – I wait. For what? I don’t know.
The world is wet and damp with rains of tears.
And I – I hope. For what? I don’t know.
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Sophia White
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Landrey 04 December 2006

strong poem. Nice continuation of the flow despite the unpredictable rhyming. A nice twist on convention with 'all the wrong knots have come undone.' Very nice, Ms. White. -landrey

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