I Don't Even Smile Comments

A poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful and heartfelt piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

I don't even smile For you, endurance finally breaks Washes over us with violence I will snap, I can't shake this off anymore.. ...... very beautiful

Sounds like a slow cultivation of a sudden snap- but sheds light on understanding expressions do not necessarily reveal the truth of emotions but are more like practiced acts that masque what is really going on.

I don't even smile For you, endurance finally breaks Washes over us with violence I will snap, I can't shake this off anymore........touching expression. A beautiful poem on anger astutely presented. Thanks for sharing.

I get sucked in and then get spit out in a place I don't recognize Not worried about being lost Not worried about being alone. inner anger expressed in fine verses...... thank u dear poet. tony