Monday, April 22, 2013

I Don'T Believe In Roses Comments

Rating: 3.3

You promised me for two roses,
When we reached dere on garden
All da roses were died!

Now roses are blooming again on mountain
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Ruby Mostazir
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M Asim Nehal 22 December 2018

In love and war everything is OK but a promise is a promise, ...Nicely written 100++

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Ruby Mostazir 12 January 2014

@Ed Nigma dis is so nice of you my friend thnzs for da flower :)

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Wahab Abdul 01 May 2013

you promised me two roses, ...........not even one materialised...nice broken heart poem....like it

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Ruby Mostazir 28 April 2013

nothing symbolic...da poem is abt a promise between 2 lovers! thnks,

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 April 2013

Rose the imagery of.. two died blooming in mountain, wedding bed It's not the soul n body /As per me Mountain is the indicative diction for female/wedding bed relates / promised for two kids...u know better kindly explain deep poem

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Gajanan Mishra 22 April 2013

roses - soul and body, everywhere, all pervading, eternal Roses are blooming and blooming, life-roses. fine poem, I love it, thought-provoking.

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