I Don’t Believe Anymore Comments

a poignant write penned with deep emotion about current times and false hopes..belief blinded with false promises...well penned

the concern, the theme is unmatched.........well done

many reasons why man grew with insecurities. to me it seems that man is nothing but limited, weak, egnorant in many ways yet still believing that he's not at all- the illusion of pride in us.

well composed poem.thanx for sharing voted10 surya

Deependra, you write about polititians worldwide not only in Napal...I enjoyed this write very much aspecially living in South Africa... thank you for the invite Regards Alf

well as a poem, it is so exciting and as an idea it seems to be a real action as whole..let e conclude it you have done so very well luwi

Unrealized dreams, lost hopes It is one piece that is so well engineered, that it changes from an tight analytical poem to one which is rational enough to be a true message.The metaphoric and literal are perfectly balanced, a perfect way the poet makes meaning with art. Excellent poem 10+++++++++++

good theme...good presentation...thanks...10

horrifying....if our belief walks away....u have given us an insight abt the life of those people....let hope and belief never leave their home and land...may peace and faith prevail... thanks for sharing.

Excellent poem Jha ji. The refrain in the first stanzas and in the last one a conclusive stroke.........just beautiful. Very well written.

I think it`s a very deep poem and penned in a very smart way...

very nice and deep thoughts penned. thanks for sharing. i wish there was something we could have done to clean this mess of life. may be if we all try a little bit harder from our sides we would be able to bring some changes and hope.

One day, my belief grew legs, And walked away, i like this experssion, thanks for sharing

One day many others may grow legs and march with you to truth and justice. It's always in the name of one god or another. Interesting atheists don't blow things up or shoot non believers. I'm thinking...thinking...thinking... 10 from me.