Friday, November 4, 2011

I Do Not Love You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do not be frightened
That I not written
For so long
I have been looking
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Benjamin Paa Willie
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 14 November 2011

wow! that takes guts....Anele said 'good piece', , Dave said 'good poem, , Crim said 'beautiful poem, , Ray said 'quality work', , Christina said 'nice and beautiful', , unwritten soul said 'its a bomb', , Siya is saying 'superb'....

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Unwritten Soul 14 November 2011

It is a bomb when the one you share the letter read this, but you faster calm with your honest and softly written words there...I dont know to analyze poem but i know if the poem is good i can feel the soul inside the write....like this :) _Unwritten Soul

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Christina Hodges 14 November 2011

NICE POEM ITS SO BEAUTIFUL

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Raymond Uyok 05 November 2011

This is a true expression of indepth feelings; a sort of confession that tends to be provocative but true. A lot of lovers out there, do find themselves in the same shoe but lack the courage to express it, thus keep pretending till a time indefinite. The diction is simple but the poem, in my humble opinion, is a worthwhile addition to a collection. Don't lose the touch, keep writing quality works.

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Wow! emm....mhh right straight in her face? :) :) good piece brother.

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Crimson Love 04 November 2011

Nice poem, I enjoyed it, beautiful!

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Dave Walker 04 November 2011

Liked it, good poem, good write.

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Benjamin Paa Willie

Benjamin Paa Willie

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