I do know where my life's journey began at
Though I do not have a clue where it will end
When the Reaper will come to claim the life's breath from me
Though that will occur on such one can depend.
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The poem is thought-provoking with some errors in the statements - understandably from one who has no foundation of biblical truth. First, it is the Ten Commandments of God -not Moses' fifth commandment. Second, not all religions are about the real God because many are false and deceiving. Having said that, I respect your views and appreciate the poetry form, depth, and impact your writing presents.