Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
Monday, November 3, 2014

I Do Not Know Anything Comments

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I am so innocent newly born and crying,
To walk over ground I am more trying.
I do not know when I do fall and stand,
When do me sleep and weak up in land.
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul
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Lyn Paul 17 November 2014

How we never want that bond to be broken between mother and child. beautifully expressed and thank you too for your poet notes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Salini Nair 04 November 2014

beautifully presented the feelings of a new born child.......

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John Sky Dadzie 04 November 2014

Beautiful childhood days wat can i say in a beautiful writing yeh!

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Valsa George 03 November 2014

Childhood is the time of bliss when a baby is loved and tenderly taken care of by its mother! A child is so innocent and is nearer to Heaven! It seems that childhood is a pet theme for you! Enjoyed!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 November 2014

Beautiful childhood days shining with simplicity and innocence where we can feel God's presence......so wonderfully crafted with touching words.........amazing

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 November 2014

A Beautiful poem speaking through silent whispers of a child. So many pictures comes to child's mind, though unknown to anyone. Child speaks a lot, it has a thought on its own, only we couldn't listen to it. Many beautiful lines... I think of past death recent pain of birth I do not know how I fall in lap of Earth. Mother holds with love softly touches, Up to her my whole wish gently reaches. Beautiful presentation and thoughtful write. Loved reading each lines. Thanks for sharing with us. Thank you for the beautiful comments for my poems.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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