Saturday, June 23, 2012

I Do Love You Comments

Rating: 4.8

Baby we're the perfect two, there's no complication.
The only mathematics we need is me plus you it's the perfect equation.
But when we're in science we create a chemical reaction.
Ten out of Ten is our love expressed as a fraction.
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Theo Williams
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Unwritten Soul 26 August 2012

This is such an electric attractive poetry, you combine all subjects, mathematics, science, geography, history, religion, philosophy and languages to unite combine to make additional feelings in such beautiful reactions of hearts with stunning climates of emotions, so it could be written in beautiful scripture this way in such amazing way...top marks! _Unwritten Soul

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Kaila George 01 July 2012

Shes gotta be one lucky lady....(pulls out tissue as I read) thank you for sharing. As always brillant.

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Jinal Oswal 29 June 2012

This is a real cute poem of yours... Wow! ! ! I believe your words...: D Its nice to see your words creating a magic.. Keep writing! ! !

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Darci Anderson 27 June 2012

I am amazed! You really have a way with words!

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Godfrey Morris 27 June 2012

This is a very creative piece. All there is to learn is there - in Love! ! !

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Smiley Hooker 27 June 2012

So sweet! Enough to melt a lover's heart.: -)

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Elena Sandu 26 June 2012

Edison invented electricity but you invented sparks of publicity, can't stop my smiles, you nailed it nice, good poem, full of passion thank you for share.

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Dan Green 26 June 2012

Well written again :) very creative poet. I liked the comparisons and the accumulation of deepness throughout the poem.

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Shouvik Roy 26 June 2012

very creative, liked the comparisons..10 on 10.. :) ..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 June 2012

a perfect love in a vast imagination belt is poured in poetic style. marks 10

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Ramesh Rai 25 June 2012

Your love is 10 to the power ten. Superb. nice. brilliant fabulous, praiseworthy

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Grant Lovell 25 June 2012

I like how compare things in this poem. Good stuff.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 24 June 2012

i like the matter in this poem but be bit short. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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