Poem
TITLE: I DO IT FOR LOVE
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Lovely poem with lots of expectations. Well, love is comparative........love.. love to be loved.... lol, But....there is a BIIGG BUT, the rality is totally different in some cases. Nicely penned, well done
glittered tooth, brown barbequed eyes and charcoaled hairs...some different metaphors i see here...njoyed reading!
very wonderful piece..so touching...with words so powerful... words that can melt her heart..... The love is burning in this poem... doing everything for love...so romantic.. breathtaking piece.... ..a ten
I'm not sure I agree with everything you said, but I do understand your point. You could have said much more. That is the only problem I see. I like to see an ending to things relate to the beginning. That part was not as clear. Still, It was a worthy writing and a joy to read. GW62