Thursday, January 7, 2010

I Do Comments

Rating: 4.5

As the sun rises for horizon's journey
I, too, rise by the silent pleasure
of your face, my lovely wife
Because your beauty lives beyond
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Vincent Feliciano
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Seamus O Brian 22 November 2016

This is a truly beautiful work. A wonderful tribute to authentic love. 'Thus I possess you the way my body owns my heart...' is undoubtedly one of the most beautifully romantic lines of verse in all the sappy world of love poetry. Bravo on this remarkable piece.

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