I Dislike You To Be Still Comments

Such a nice poem, Valentina Fan. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

wonderful piece. Am impressed by your choice of expressing your feelings through a blank verse. Obviously, the longing and feeling for your friend or 'lover' is so tensed that you have little time for rhymes, and this reflects in how your stanzas are structured. The use of 'big' vocabulary and onomatopoeic words add amazing touch to the poem, just like the classical allusion 'aurora' adds beautiful reference to it. In all, is a beautiful poem. Keep writing!

Lovely poetry. Smooth sailing and nice wording. Liked it.

nice choosing of word..wonderful written..great work thnx 4 sharing..

I can sense the patience, the waiting, the longing...for something to happen. The fifth stanza is perfect. Great poem.

Heartfelt poem........ But how can I say, I do not like you, I do not like you to be still.