Wednesday, February 8, 2006

I Died Too... Comments

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I watched the sunset pass me by
And I whispered your name into the sky
I couldn't take it so I closed my eyes
And screamed my last good-bye.
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Scarlett Treat 11 February 2006

Strange, but you have found the way to heal - by crying your tears onto the paper, sharing with others the pain. I can't wait until you find the joy, and see what comes off your pen then! ! Wow! Scarlett

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Mary Nagy 09 February 2006

Great poem Crystal. It's so hard dealing with death. They same time heals..........but, I think it just numbs. Great job. Sincerely, Mary

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William Jackson 08 February 2006

Your poem is very sad. It makes me think of Poe's Annabelle Lee.

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Crystal Johnson

Crystal Johnson

Maury County, Tennessee
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